Tuesday, October 23, 2007

I was once dating this girl who i fell in love with.I tried to so much in this relationship that we shared together.Things started to get bumby when problems in my life stared to occur,thats when i noticed her change in attuide.She always told me that she will be there for me when things where going good but as soon as something happen her true colors came out. I guess you dont know a person until their trust is realy put on the line.

2 comments:

Adam Nathanson said...

Mr. Rounds,

This supporting paragraph is exactly what I was looking for. When put together with several other related paragraphs, you'll certainly have what would be a passing GED Essay. Can you think of another example of this type of behaviour, from films perhaps, to write another paragraph about now? Keep it up!

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Trey said...

I just wanted to applaud Mr.Rounds on this subject. Recently, I had the same exact problem happen to me, so I can definitely relate to this blog!!!