Thursday, October 18, 2007

biggie

So u want to be hardcore with your hat to the back, talking about gats in your raps. I cant feel that hardcore appeal that your singing maybe im dreaming.

2 comments:

Mr.Hundred Rounds said...

he is just saying that alot things that u hear is not what it seems to be

Adam Nathanson said...

Brandon,

Looks good, a powerful selection of lyrics. My suggestion is to expand upon the idea expressed by telling a paragraph-long story that uses specific details about a time when something in life was not what it appeared to be.

Also, if you go to fasttrackged.blogspot.com, you'll see a list of all the blogs from the class that you can add to your blog.